shark!!!!!

Deep in the murky shadows lye a gigantic shark that waits for a slight stench of blood, I am water I should know. There lye coral with blood upon it. Quick movement, the shark follows then, screaming, then… silence! Do not bleed in water!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Hawaii Man!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thesis
Have you ever gone to Hawaii?
Make this the experience of your lifetime.
Do you know what its like to get off the plane and feel
that warm air coming through your system?
If you have not, you need to go to Hawaii!!!!!

First body paragraph
I have gone to Hawaii and I loved it there. The culture there is rich with greeting and celebration. They have luaus and boat rides, quading, volcano exploring, horses, scenery, surfing, ect… many things to do that involve fun! I enjoy the quading most out of all the different things. People spend most of their lives trying to make you visit comfortable and fantastic. Fantastic for your next stay or to tell friends of yours to come. It makes it kind of like a persuasive way for them to get money while your having a great time of fun.

Second body paragraph
The food there is amazing! They have special luaus where you eat pig. You watch the people berry it in the ground while being cooked in leafs. They also have other great foods to go with that. I loved it because after the eating there was more. They had a supervisor show you all the different plants and animals that once did and still do live on the island(s). But anyway there are tons of different places to eat (including ice cream)!

Third body paragraph
When I got there the airport felt warm air, a feeling so nice! I went to my condo and saw a sunset extremely appealing. The water was as blue as the sky on a sunny day. The sand on the island varied in color and feel as I walked down the beaches. The next day I went scuba diving with my family, now that was incredible!
I went in the surf I got to swim with a turtle that was half my size.

e-trade baby

i punish you cat!!!!!!

jumping cat

3 body paragraphs (school work)

The day I got my first quad was amazing. I got my first quad when I was 5 years old. I love driving whenever I get a chance. I store it at my grand parents and only ride it when I go there on the twelve acres of land unless I bring it home. The day I got it, it was my birthday I went into my grandpa’s shop and it sat in the middle, I felt like I was being kicked by a midget.
Driving is the fun part, so were should I start? If you ever go to a dirt land, trails, or off any jumps it’s a challenge but really fun. It’s a challenge because you have to try not to flip it like the first time I did it I broke the fan, exost pipe, and fender. I got it fixed and I was not hurt. I went quading in many fun places but the best place was somewhere in Puyallup. The best time to ride is in summer. I think that the thing I am trying to tell you all is that “if no risks there are no rewards”.
There are many driving tricks you can try. The most favorite of mine is the donut. The donut is when you do a 360 on the ground. You can do this best on dirt by turning your wheels to the right or left and hold down the front brake while pressing the throttle in. there are many others to try on jumps shown in the following. Regular jump, 180 flip, 360 flip ect…., donut, more ect…. Look online for more.
Have you ever driven a quad? If so was it fun? If not imagine the engines running, the exost blowing though the wind and see your self driving, well do you see it, do you see it? The main purpose for this essay is to tell the reader to get a quad and ride for ever, and to tell of my experience.

speed up!!!!!