!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Hawaii Man!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thesis
Have you ever gone to Hawaii?
Make this the experience of your lifetime.
Do you know what its like to get off the plane and feel
that warm air coming through your system?
If you have not, you need to go to Hawaii!!!!!

First body paragraph
I have gone to Hawaii and I loved it there. The culture there is rich with greeting and celebration. They have luaus and boat rides, quading, volcano exploring, horses, scenery, surfing, ect… many things to do that involve fun! I enjoy the quading most out of all the different things. People spend most of their lives trying to make you visit comfortable and fantastic. Fantastic for your next stay or to tell friends of yours to come. It makes it kind of like a persuasive way for them to get money while your having a great time of fun.

Second body paragraph
The food there is amazing! They have special luaus where you eat pig. You watch the people berry it in the ground while being cooked in leafs. They also have other great foods to go with that. I loved it because after the eating there was more. They had a supervisor show you all the different plants and animals that once did and still do live on the island(s). But anyway there are tons of different places to eat (including ice cream)!

Third body paragraph
When I got there the airport felt warm air, a feeling so nice! I went to my condo and saw a sunset extremely appealing. The water was as blue as the sky on a sunny day. The sand on the island varied in color and feel as I walked down the beaches. The next day I went scuba diving with my family, now that was incredible!
I went in the surf I got to swim with a turtle that was half my size.